Star Superion Comic Script

I hope this file card image is liked.. and if you get time, check out the script for Star Superion's origin issue, below!!

no dialogue is written just the scenes..
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characters in this issue:

STAR SUPERION
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Now as far as the origin of Star Superion goes here are some more of the players in this origin story:

Sovereign:
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KOG:
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Mr. Bolts:
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Doctor Argoss/Teh Zeeb:
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The Komissar:
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STAR SUPERION
ORIGIN ISSUE SCRIPT:


PAGE 1:

Scene 1:
A large slightly futuristic building, with a sign out front on the ground that says “Monument labs”..

Scene 2: A man dressed in a suit walking next to Mr. Bolts of the Machina, and 2 Robot body guards in suits behind them..in a hall way of Monument labs..

Scene 3: shot of the man in the suit, accessing a secret button on the elevator wall,

Scene 4: Mr. Bolts outside of the elevator (clasping his suit coat), with a shot behind him of the outdoors front lobby of the lab..the man in the suit is lying against the elevator wall on the floor, with blood behind his head..

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PAGE 2:

Scene 1:

A shot of the front of the machina corporate Building (large sky scraper with the logo on the front, no text in the logo), with Mr. Bolts walking in, passing by two robot body guards, in suits..

Scene 2: (a small box)

shows a light signal from Mr. Bolts eye, and a response by the robot guards robotic eyes.. (this shows the androids and Mr. bolts communicating via their robot eyes, verifying their legitimacy..

Scene 3:

A dark desk area, with a shadowed figure of the K.O.G. behind him is a large bunch of television screens.. Which show surveillance of the outside and other areas.. a small shot in the scene of Mr. Bolts hand.. Or arm..

Scene 4:

Mr. Bolts with his hat off, and his face looking forward (about to exit the room).. behind him we see the KOG leaning forward on his desk, with his robotic face looming.. and the back ground we see the computer screens.. one large image with a security guard dead by some trash cans..

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PAGE 3:

Scene 1:

Adam Powers is dressed in a security guard outfit, and is walking next to a woman in a short skirt, with a lab coat over top, glasses and hair up in a bun..her hand is outstretched and is pointing to a security guard desk, in the lobby of Monument labs..

Scene 2:

a shot of the Lady and Adam Powers walking down the hall from behind, as the (star trek like doors) are along the hall..

Scene 3:

the Lady shows Adam some futuristic machinery.. (large Machine with a top side view of the Lady and Adam looking upwards)

Scene 4:

The lady is walking off from Adam, as he is standing behind the guard desk..(think the security guard post in the movie Die Hard..)

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PAGE 4:

Scene 1:

Doctor Argoss, talking to a slender man, with slicked back Dark hair, and very pointy features.. with glasses on.. in a lab coat, underneath is a Black Business suit..Doctor Zog

Doctor Argoss is standing next to Dr. Zog and they look angry with each other..

Scene 2:

Doctor argoss, walks into his own lab, and the door closes behind him..(star trek doors)

Scene 3:

We see a progression of the Human Doctor Argoss turn into the alien Teh Zeeb.. (half of the face turns alien as the rest turns from human in lab coat to Alien as well)

Scene 4:

Alien (Teh Zeeb) is standing in front of a large pod shaped machine, with an opened glass shield, and tubes coming out from the machine attached to the wall, and other various machinery around , and a control panel
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PAGE 5:

Scene 1:

Alien (Teh Zeeb) raises his head, and looks to the side, with a shot behind him of the door to his Lab opening slowly (Star Trek Type Doors)..

Scene 2:

Teh Zeeb turns back to Doctor argoss in a hurray, just as Doctor Zog enters the lab


Scene 3: Doctor Argoss points and yells at Doctor Zog, just as Doctor Zog is pulling a gun on him..

Scene 4:

The Two men Struggle, with the Gun and are shooting wildly in the room..

Scene 5:

a close up of the Pod machine, and an energy meter going higher..(the machine is armed and ready..

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PAGE 6:

Scene 1:

Adam Powers front desk, (large clock behind him shows 9:45PM in digital) is seeing a fight on his monitor and is astonished..(Shocked face) outside is night time, and lights with shrubs and bushes can be seen through the windows of the lobby.. Chairs in the lobby..


Scene 2:

We see Adam running down the futuristic hallway of Monument labs..with a flashlight in one hand..hat beginning to fall off his head, in his security guard outfit..

Scene 3:

As Adam enters the room, and crashes into the two fighting doctors, the gun falls to the floor ( adam side view crashing into the two men, legs in the air.. looks like a football tackle pile up mid stream..)

Scene 4:

Adam falls over the men and is falling backwards into the pod with all the wires and tubes coming out of it..…

Scene 5:

The Pod doors close, as steam rises out of the doors sides..

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PAGE 7:


Scene 1:

The Machine glows, and we see the face of Doctor argoss, and Doctor Zog, arms stretched out from the back view.. looking at the glowing pod, and a flashing light behind it, showing approaching critical mass..

Scene 2:

a scene of the outside of the back side of Monument labs, just as a large explosion blows flames out the side of the building..

Scene 3:

The Pod is opened, and Adam is awakening off the floor, with tattered clothes..
Wreckage around him..

Scene 4:

Standing above Adam, is the Alien form of Doctor Argoss, just as he is looking down at Adam..

Scene 5.

Alien clasps a device on his wrist, and teleports (silhouette of his body half and half real..)

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PAGE 8:

Scene 1:

Adam sees the Doctor Zog, and stirs his shoulder, we see the doctor Zog, face down in rubble..slight view of Adam in the scene..

Scene 2:

Doctor Zog, has experience a severe Break down in his mind, and turns to Adam Wild eyes and Shoots him, with mouth open yelling..

Scene 3:

Adam looks down at his body, with lines of bullets bouncing off him, no bullet holes, and his eyes are wide opened in amazement..

Scene 4:

Adam powers is looking down at the floor as we see him from the top of his head, as his body hovers above the rubble..

Scene 5:

Shot of the rubble in the spot Zog was, Doctor Zog has disappeared and looking up we see Adam powers is flying away.. moon in the sky, and some smoke in the lower corner of the scene..

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Page 9:

Scene 1:

New York 1, action News, caster at her desk, side window we see a bank building.. (as if your watching breaking news on TV)

Scene 2:

Bank door on the front of the bank explodes..

Scene 3:

Large frame scene of the Komissar, with bags of money in his hands..

Scene 4:

Police cars in front of the bank, and police with guns aimed at the Komissar..

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Page 10:

Scene 1:

Komissar shoots gas from his hands and escapes in the cloud..

Scene 2:

Blond haired news guy in front of the camera runs to the corner of the street..

Scene 3:

Clicks a button on his wrist and his hologram suit and false hair and face turns into the Star Superion..

Scene 4:

The Komissar gets a hit on the chin , by the Star Superion and money bags are sent flying..

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Page 11:

Scene 1:

We see Adam powers dressed in his costume as Star Superion, fighting the Komissar..!! a punch towards the Komissar

Scene 2:

The komissar (he can change his body to elements, solid and liquid.. gases, etc.. flames, electricity..) the body of the komissar, becomes liquid as Star Superion’s Fist lands, and the liquid then turns to a different position, where the Komissar has star Superion’s Arm..

Scene 3:

The Komissar Launches Star Superion in to the air..by swinging him over his head, by Star Superion’s arm..

Scene 4:

Star Superion hits a Building and crashes into the wall, rubble flies..

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Page 12:

Scene 1:

Star Superion flying towards us, full blast, energy beginning to form around his body.. lines of extreme flight around him..

Scene 2:

the Komissar, from the back as Star Superion launches into his body, Komissar, dubbling over..

Scene 3:

Komissar’s hand is raised, and two shots of it (one as it’s normal) then (one as it turns to metal)..

Scene 4:

Star Superion’s Body, Now lit up, (like a super saiyan from Dragon ball Z) is punching the Komissar into a Bus..


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PAGE 13:

Scene 1:

The komissar is in the bus, as Star Superion’s hands, hit over and over again, fast…

Scene 2:

Komissar is seen floating through the bus on the other side in a gas form, but retaining his body..

Scene 3:

The Komissar is flying above the city streets, and is looking down as star superion is on the street next to the bus..

Scene 4:

Komissar flying is then hit from behind by lasers from below..

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PAGE 14: VARIOUS FIGHT SCENES with the Komissar and Star Superion (Your Choice)
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PAGE 15: VARIOUS FIGHT SCENES with the Komissar and Star Superion (Your Choice)
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PAGE 16: VARIOUS FIGHT SCENES with the Komissar and Star Superion (Your Choice)
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PAGE 17:

STAR SUPERION reflects on his training by the older Super hero known as the Sovereign..fight training, and their secret base, the hologram generator on his wrist for his secret identity, his costume, and the job as a TV journalist for New York Action 1 news (your choice, just various scenes telling this story, leading up to his first battle on the scene as Star Superion)
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PAGE 18:

STAR SUPERION reflects on his training by the older Super hero known as the Sovereign..fight training, and their secret base, the hologram generator on his wrist for his secret identity, his costume, and the job as a TV journalist for New York Action 1 news (your choice, just various scenes telling this story, leading up to his first battle on the scene as Star Superion)

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PAGE 19:

STAR SUPERION reflects on his training by the older Super hero known as the Sovereign..fight training, and their secret base, the hologram generator on his wrist for his secret identity, his costume, and the job as a TV journalist for New York Action 1 news (your choice, just various scenes telling this story, leading up to his first battle on the scene as Star Superion)

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PAGE 20:

Scene 1:

Star Superion is holding the Komissar by his shirt and hits him in the face

Scene 2:

The Komissar hits into the street, with rubble flying into the air, as Star Superion is floating above..

Scene 3:

Star Superion is standing next to police in armored gear, with the komissar in a containment box, with his hands in large metal shackles, which cover his hands..

Scene 4:

We see Star Superion flying up to the sky..

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PAGE 21:

Scene 1:

Monument labs, rubble section from doctor argoss lab that was destroyed by the explosion… we see Mr. bots, standing over the destroyed section of the lab..with two robot body gurads (in suits)

Scene 2:

We see a small glowing metal orb, and mr. Bolts looking at it..

Scene 3: we see him pick it up and smile..with the reflection of the orb in his cyborg eye..

Scene 4:

We see Doctor Argoss (in alien mode) hiding behind a wall watching Mr. Bolts and his robot body guards (in suits) walking off with the orb..


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PAGE 22:

Scene 1:

Machina Head Quarters building, (large sky scraper with machine design on the outside) with robot suited door guards..in front of the main door..

Scene 2:

Walking down the hall is the K.O.G. with Doctor Zog..

Scene 3:

Doctor Zog looks into a glass room with the KOG behind him..slight reflection of scientists studying the Glowing orb..

Scene 4:

The Glowing orb is being placed into a machine with pieces of metal around it..one of the young scientists, turns around just as the rest leave the room, and we see the face of the scientist, slightly turn into the alien Teh Zeeb..

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PAGE 23:

Scene 1:

We See the Star Superion flying into a sewer hole under a bridge..


Scene 2:

We see Star Superion flying past a sign that says do not enter, and subway system..

Scene 3:

The old subway train station is lit up and has large blocks, and hallways (arch hallways) Think teenage mutant ninja turtles lair..

Scene 4: we see Star Superion walk into a large control room, with the sewer pipes and controls and computer machinery around the room..large monitors, and glass jars with silhouette costumes in them..

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PAGE 24:

Scene 1:

Star Superion looks up, as his mentor and friend Sovereign is hovering above..

Scene 2:

Star Superion is watching as Sovereign is turning a dial on the control booth, and we see above the control center a balcony with various metal doors.. one is opening..

Scene 3:

We see the Alien Teh Zeeb, in the doorway, and a floating Sovereign with his arm stretched out next to the Alien..( as to introduce him)

Scene 4:

Teh Zeeb and Star Superion next to each other, with Teh Zeeb turning into Doctor Argoss, and Star Superion with a shocking look on his face..

The End..